Last Summer….A Review

reviews, authors, writingreviews, authors, writing     2 out of 5 quills       A Review   ‘Last Summer’  by Kerry Lonsdale 

 

This could have been a good little story. But unfortunately it needs some serious editing.  The tense of the writing switched, for no apparent reason, from current tense to past tense and back again.  Very distracting and amateurish.

After the first couple of chapters I wondered why an editor hadn’t caught this.  Most, if not all, books are written in past tense.  And when the author chooses to write in present tense it is intentional and consistent. 

The story couldn’t hold my attention due to this problem.
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